Saturday, May 18, 2024

TRAPED IN A CASTLE... SPA's CASTLE CHALLENGE...


Life in a castle is not all that they said 
 you can't run in the hallways 
you can't jump on the bed, 
 don't slide down the banister 
or bump down the stairs 
 and never no never 
put your feet on the chairs. 
 The rooms are so cold 
 you must wear a coat 
 and no one's allowed 
to swim in the moat. 
 Now I must admit 
there's a beautiful view 
 but you just sit around 
with nothing to do. 
 So I'm moving back down 
to my cottage you see 
 a castle just isn't 
what it's cracked up to be. 
 
DSW 13

3 comments:

Kym Decker said...

Great work! Nice piece!

peggy gatto said...

Just so fun!!

Win Dinn, Artist said...

This is outstanding, Deann - not only is the visual a wonderful picture of being trapped, your fabulous poetry reminds us that things are not always as they seem. May we remember this as we view others' lives. 💗